Friday 30 May 2014

Autumn

Walt: Use nouns and verbs to create powerful sentences about Autumn.

Autumn  
1.Outside,the sun, sky and birds shine in the frozen Autumn breeze,and the trees rock and groan and stand side by side like skittles amongst the gloomy fields.

2.Outside leaves,grass and butterflies spiral around the frosty air, and acorns shoot and sway and fire down towards the crunchy leaves on the ground.   

Friday 9 May 2014

The Baking

The Baking Moment

W.A.L.T: capture a moment in time when recounting a personal experience.

I heard “come on I’m starving” as they smelt the scrumptious smell.

I heard “yay!” as I handed out the pikelets.

I saw the golden pikelets  as I gave them out.

I saw them munching up all the tasty pikelets.

I felt overjoy because I made them myself.

I felt excitement race down my back.

I wondered  if they’ll ask me again?

I wondered what I’ll make next time?  

 


   

Wednesday 7 May 2014

The best part.



What was your best part of the week?

Mine was that Miss Simmons was back on monday!!