Strike or not?
I feel nervous and overwhelmed by the talking all around me.
I feel the heavy ball slipping slowly from my hands.
I hear other balls rolling towards the skittles and smashing into them.
I hear the yelling of victory from a strike.
I see the gutter guards slowly come up.
I see people carefully choose their balls.
I wonder if I will win and will I yell with victory?
I wonder if I would get a strike?
You have some very good descriptive words in this peice of wrting Chloe. Your writing sure is amazing work!:-)
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