Wednesday 25 March 2015

An odd thing you will never belive




While reading the news I came across this article about a person that wants to improve the sea and the future. (see in link above)


I found it interesting because I have never seen a odd thing like this before.

It makes me think of a book I read called save our seas.

I notice how they want to make it a better sea for the sea life.

I’m surprised that they thought of this kind of thing.

I really like the way how they did the cool photos and did all they can to give everyone an idea to look after the sea.

Wednesday 18 March 2015

complex sentences

We have been learning to change simple sentences into complex ones.




  1. The drill squealed loudly Where the men were building
  2. The drill squealed loudly when the builder made a house
  3. The drill squealed loudly before lunch time.
  4. The drill squealed loudly since the house was crumbled
  5. The drill squealed loudly while the house was being built




We have also discovered that you can flip the sentences around.



  1. While the house was being built the drill squealed loudly
  2. Where the men were building the drill squealed loudly

Monday 16 March 2015

Big friendly dog.




http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/animals/misunderstood-monsters/



have been reading the news today and came across this interesting article about a pit bull bread that is very friendly and can be trusted with a 3 yr old see in link above



found it interesting because I believed that those dogs are scary and now has shown that they are friendly.


I can relate to it because I have a cat that is really fat and can push over a 3 yr old but is really nice.



I’m surprised that the dog is real friendly and is real nice


I wonder if the dog is friends with anyone it sees?


I wonder if the dog is acutely friendly?


The Men in black part one

The Men Black Part 1 :)   
Tears trickled to the hard ground as her parents leave for a holiday. She hopes that they will see them soon. As soon as her Mum and Dad are out of sight the argument between Kieran and Kayley starts. A car pulls up then Chloe and Emma get out.  Yay they get to stay with me At Nans while they are gone when the fighting stops Kieran and Kayley turn around and says “We wish you three were not here and would not come back.” Larine, Chloe and Emma were surprised because they never sound like that it must mean that they are under control but they did not know.


The next day Larine, Chloe and Emma saw the postman so they went out to get the mail.  When they got there Larine pointed out the that she saw a man in black and he was pointing to them. Shocked, Chloe said “What do you want”? and the man in black said  “We need you” then Emma speaks up “What do you mean We?” “Ahh you may want to look around” Chloe whispers. oh no they are in big trouble the for next thing they knew it green gas was in the air and soon they fell into a deep sleep and was taken somewhere.


As Larine wakes up the sea water splashed on her and dolphins call to each other the boat stops what had happened? Was this really true? She spins around and finds out that she was beside Emma and Chloe they had just woken up did they think the same thing as her? But now wasn't the time to ask, someone was coming the next sound she heard was a voice she did not know “Take them to shore and keep them there” “ok” was the strange reply she tried to yell out help but something stopped her “Ahh you try to say help but you can’t nobody will hear you” was that a voice in the distant or was she imagining things? she did not know. “Shall we put them to sleep cause they might struggle sir”? “Yes do that you are right” the man snarled evilly in agreement.


Hisss “What was tha-? {As the girls fall back in a deep sleep} bright sunlight shone over them the first thing they heard was Emma scream “Why did you scream Emma”? Larine and Chloe says angrily “ I S-S-S saw a man and was skin and bones walking around the island” she says shakily “ Aren’t you sure that this is a torture cam- {A girl walks up} “Oh hello you must be new my name is Anne do you mind if you call me Anne with an ‘e’. Oh I nearly forgot what's your name” “ My name is Chloe this is Larine and this is Emma. sorry I thought you were coming to kill us” “Oh its okay I always hear that” “Oh good what is this place?” “Its a place where people get put for safety and will not be harmed by the world but that's what I heard anyway, It might be something else. And Larine was taken back home for some reason and is now in the car.


Go to Larine's blog to see part 2 :) With more character's and Men in Black

    

Wednesday 11 March 2015

The saviour dog

http://www.kiwikidsnews.co.nz/animals/saviour-dog/




I have been reading the news today and came across this interesting article about a saviour dog and how it woke the family up. {see in link above} 

I found it interesting because It is very brave to do something like this and show that the oven was not only on but the gas was leaking.

I can relate to it because I have warned to my brothers about something thats dangerous.

I wonder if the family gave a new reward to the dog.
I wonder if the dog is very happy.
I wonder if the family has got a new house.

Thursday 5 March 2015

The Cool Swimming



Beep! The medley is starting, the racing students are full with energy and ready to win. The water spreads out to the boiling air and splashes into tiny bits and drops like it is raining. The towels are lined up and ready for the swimmers to sit down.The cheering gets louder by the minute. The medley is about to finish who has won? As the shivering students make their way back from swimming in the cold pool to where they claimed to be. their friends started to ask hard questions.

“Next!” Boomed the announcer, “is freestyle!!” Oh no that is me and since it is my first time in the competition I have butterflies in my tummy but that is not going to stop me. So I walk up to the starting line and… 3! 2! 1! beep! I dive in, as I hit the water I felt the shivers run up and down my spine wow it is freezing in here. As I got out the next was the finals but I was not in it so I go and sit down.



Next is backstroke for the width as soon as I heard the beep I was off towards the line. I did not get into either 3 place or 2 or 1st So I waited to be told to get out next was the length backstroke. I waited for my last swim which was breaststroke. The finals have finished so now is breaststroke. I walked to the start and hopped in then the beep went and I tried to do my best once I felt the cold wet concrete and stopped it was a new high score for me.

As I made way to the seat I was beaming ear to ear, it was so fun I wish I could do it again and again! I knew that I had persevered to my goal In my mind, I felt I had meet my challenge and I found out how much fun it was when I tried harder at everything, so for now on I will try harder at things I do not try hard at and have more, fun and have more skill in it. I wonder if I will improve in swimming and get into other things.