Holidays are just right.
I am writing to you that the holidays are just right because if it was any longer you would get bored, and run out of things to do. Here are some reasons why.
To begin with the holidays are just right because you can chill, relax, put the term behind you and be ready for the next term. Also you have time to go away for the amount of time you wished to have.
Also if the holidays were any longer you would start to miss your friends your brothers and sisters will start to annoy you and be siller by the second, and you would love to have sports start again so you can get away from the house.
On last reason is that you will start to get bored if the holidays were longer because the jobs you do, You would be doing the exactly same jobs over and over again and when you have free time you will be sick of the toys and games you have played over one hundred times.
Therefore I strongly believe that holidays are just right. and if one of the reasons happened you would be either bored or sick of things.
Well done Chloe. Great first attempt. We will work on giving examples and explaining your reasons in more detail next week.
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ReplyDeleteThat you state your viewpoint cleary. You need more persuasive language.
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