I Am From...
I am from... a comfortable rented house, close to sport games near the home of poor, where there are birds tweeting. I am from... a family- where it means getting together with our cousins, where holidays were long and exciting and we had a lot of fun at Christmas time and running around like skating. I am from... “don’t waste time to go to school” “If you don’t have something nice to say don’t say it at all”. I am from... home cooking, playing and swimming, Saturday netball and Sunday church and a world of kindness happiness and joy.
Wow, Chloe, what a fantastic piece of writing! I love your last sentence where you mention that you are from 'a world of kindness, happiness and joy'. Great use of commas in your writing, Chloe. You have done a great job at putting many of them in the appropriate places.
ReplyDeleteWow Chloe what a interesting piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading it and wondering what you were going to say next. I agree with Miss Simmions I really like your last sentence. Keep up the good work! :-)
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