Monday 31 August 2015

last News review

While reading the news I came across an article about a giraffe who found a security camera and smiled to it.

I found it interesting because I thought that giraffes did not look around for these sort of things.

I am surprised that a small giraffe saw it and its mates did not.

I would like to know why the giraffe looked at it for a while instead of just leaving it behind   here is the link giraffe



News review

While reading the news I came across an article about someone who wins an event.

I found it interesting because it is something that would not catch my eye.

I wish i understood why they do things like this.

I wonder why she decided to do that


How does a thermometer work?

How does a thermometer work?

We have been learning about temperature in maths and we did a poster about how a thermometer works Ryleigh and I did this poster.


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Thursday 27 August 2015

Book review 2 for week 6

I think that the new title for five children and it should be:

five special children and a thing because: the children are very special in different ways. And they find this thing but found out its name is it.

Wednesday 26 August 2015

Book review 1 for week 6

I am writing an new blurb for my back of my book

Have you ever seen a sand fairy?

Have you thought of what you would do when you can get free wishes? well Cyril, Athena, Robert, Jane and their baby brother found out that most wishes leads to trouble.
They find exciting, fun, crazy and sad adventures ones that make people forget things, make them angry and sad as can be. So now they need to let their minds think a way how to fix things.



Being a Shadow

                    Cross County


As I sit there watching my friend Chloe in the shadows getting ready to run thinking that I would not run with her. On your marks get Set GO! Chloe runs off I sat there laughing at her because I would not run with her! soon Chloe reached the hot sun light there I felt like I was pulled and poked and yelled at by everyone then I realized that I was I was being pulled into the race I looked around and saw Laura Chloe’s friend as well as sparkle her friend and my friend.  She was pulled and poked just like I was. Soon I found myself on a rocky path way I moaned and groaned like anything but then rocks flicked at me I cried angrily I yelled at chloe to stop and let me walk instead of running but she does not listen to me the longer she ran the more miserable I got.


Soon I was on something soft, wet and mushy. Oh please do not be grass because I HATE getting wet. Then I found a big orange thing what is it? I see that Chloe smacked her hand on the thing I thought for a while and remembered that it was a cone when she smacked her hand down on top of the poor terrified cone I said some nice words to calm it down I look up and see that we were on a small hill I see the finish line we are going to finish soon! I get ready to yell and cheer but we pass the finish line oh please do not do another lap.


I am so so fed up with Chloe she doesn't listen to me at all. Right now I am pleading like anything saying all the words that should persuade her but no she just looks down and says look whisper I want to have a good race that is it! I will do anything to stop running I hard and see some shadows I yelled with glee I will finally have a rest but the shadow was very small I look everywhere and see the finish line I feel glad, mad at someone and tired. I hope this will not happen again!


By Chloe.

Thursday 20 August 2015

Extinct No More

While reading the news, I came across this article about a tree that was extinct once but now is not extinct.

I found it interesting because I never new that we could make it non extinct.

I'm surprised that they found that jar with the seeds in it,

here is this link Extinct No More

New street signs for Christchurch

While reading the news, I came across this article about New street signs for visitor's in Christchurch.

I found it interesting because next year in summer I will be going to Christchurch for a whole entire week for something like a camp.

I would like to know why did they have to do it now?

I am surprised that they decided to do this.

here is the link to it New Street Signs for Christchurch
 New Street Signs for Christchurch





Monday 17 August 2015

Book review 4

I am writing an alternative ending for my book
Before Celie’s pet Rufus lands He drops his bucket  full of water when he landed the bucket gave way and Celie Rolf and Rufus get splashed with water I burned her skin what was in this water she thought then she realised that it was the promised water “Rufus!” she says you got it from the lake didn't you? she asks Rufus screeches in reply oh Rufus she sobs what now? Rolf mumbles something “what was that Rolf?” says Celie “I said we will go home I think I have an Idea” Rolf said He grabs the crown puts it on and said in a loud voice “All griffins If you want to come Come to me!” a hole lot of griffins come and surrounds them “NOOOO!!!!!!” Yells the wizards “YES” they yelled back. soon a huge griffin came picked up the wizards and took them off them came back as soon as he came back Rolf shouted “Castle take us home now!” there came a rumble then they felt like they were going to be sick then they landed in their home but with Rolf and Celie and Rufus sick and on the verge of dying Bran came took them to the hart and started to heal them.

If you want to read more get it out for yourself!

Book review 3

The new title for Thursdays with the crown would be: The unknown place.

Because the place ends up as confusing place to be and there are many lies and truths they need to sort out. also there is a crown that they need to take home.

Thursday 13 August 2015

Persuasive writing

Dear Teachers

Have you seen how we wish to work together? Or when you say no to a group of kids that ask you to let them have a group and they get a little bit sad? Well I am here to tell you that you should let us have groups and we would learn stuff from that particular person. Here are my reasons why.

To begin with we would get our work done and if we finish our work with a buddy we can do more hundreds more work, and we would be learning all kinds of things from that person. We would be a lot quicker for the work we need to do and we would find things we did not know about.

Another reason is that we will make new friends because if we work with people we would not normally work with we would find that the person we work with is actually fun and good for a friend. Also we would find hidden personally that only show if you are sort of friends.

And last of all It is so good because if we work
with  someone we do not like we can get to know them better and maybe become great friends, and never want to leave their side. And if we were put with people that we are not really friends we could find out why they are shy and nervous around people and maybe help them overcome their fears.

As you can see we Really Really Really! Need to work together so we can find out new things about people and other things so I strongly believe that we should work together. So don’t you think that it will be magnificent for us to work together?

yours sincerly

Chloe.

Tuesday 11 August 2015

Book review 2


Celie is in a strange place to find  try and find the other piece of the eye also it holds evil wizards that try to put her and her siblings endanger they face lots of hard decisions that they have to chose from and they are trying to get back home to their beloved family when they find the eye which will take them home but when they were going to go home Rufus lands with a bucket of water when he lands the bucket gives way and Rolf and Celie get splashed it burnt them as the water sunk though their skin.

Book review 1

Celie looks at the strange man and asks “why is this lake poisoned?” The Arkower does not answer she looks  down and sees Pogue shivering she looks for something warm and sees Lilah wearing a cape although it was not that warm it would do. She moves to her sister and points to Pogue she did not need to be told again she took off the cape and laid it on pogue she looks down and sees something familiar is it a map or a drawing?


And this

Celie Lilah Rolth Lulath and pogue has been transferred to a place known as the glorious Arkower is it? but as they try to find the eye so they can get back they find out new things will they ever find a way back home? they don’t know as they start to find new griffins adults and babies. will they find a way to bring all of these griffins or will they go home without when they can finally get home disaster strikes.

Cross country


My goal for cross country is that I run all of the way, to never give up, remember to try my best and have fun.

Later that day

I was sitting on the mat thinking how I did. I felt that I achieved to run all of the way only stopping to fast walk for a few seconds. I knew that I had never gave up and tried my best. But most of all I had fun.