Thursday 13 August 2015

Persuasive writing

Dear Teachers

Have you seen how we wish to work together? Or when you say no to a group of kids that ask you to let them have a group and they get a little bit sad? Well I am here to tell you that you should let us have groups and we would learn stuff from that particular person. Here are my reasons why.

To begin with we would get our work done and if we finish our work with a buddy we can do more hundreds more work, and we would be learning all kinds of things from that person. We would be a lot quicker for the work we need to do and we would find things we did not know about.

Another reason is that we will make new friends because if we work with people we would not normally work with we would find that the person we work with is actually fun and good for a friend. Also we would find hidden personally that only show if you are sort of friends.

And last of all It is so good because if we work
with  someone we do not like we can get to know them better and maybe become great friends, and never want to leave their side. And if we were put with people that we are not really friends we could find out why they are shy and nervous around people and maybe help them overcome their fears.

As you can see we Really Really Really! Need to work together so we can find out new things about people and other things so I strongly believe that we should work together. So don’t you think that it will be magnificent for us to work together?

yours sincerly

Chloe.

4 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading your last reason. A very good point.

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  2. I like how you use more persuasive words. Next time try to elaborate more.

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  3. My star is that you did good with your paragraphs.
    My wish is that you could of used more elaboration

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  4. My star is that you used persuasive language.

    My wish is that you could of used more elaboration. Ryan.

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